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Sarah Perez

ANYTHING BLUE IS HYPERLINKED TO THE SPECIFIC BLOGSPOST

No need to label posts with Raji and Leanne, just Research, planning and construction

You seem to be lacking journal posts

Animatic - Beau

Looking at the animatic the cuts seem a little slow paced, and I think it could be feed up by adding in more shots e.g. more perspective on the shots that are long you could add in some close ups of his face. I know the song is slow paced but the cuts don’t even seem to be happening on a beat. In saying this and having spoken with you and Sarah I really like the concept.

Go back over these posts and add context to them e.g. how has this knowledge/research impacted the why in which you have thought about your coursework? Research on Record Labels,

You Give Me Something - James Morrison

Don’t just embed YouTube video without an explanation as to why it’s on your blog

In your arms - Music video analysis

This post should really be with the video

Bruno Mars Music video inspirations

This post should really be with the video also along with the above post there should be more commentary/ analysis

Pitch Feedback

Please comment on what you got from this feedback, summarize the feedback and how you plan to input changes in your project due to this audience feedback – this shows that you have considered audience feedback and are able to adapt you work sue to this feedback.

Blog Feedback

You haven’t commented on the feedback you got from Leanne, this shows that you haven’t critically thought about your work, although I see you have made some of the improvements. Some things Leanne mentioned and still haven’t done

 Relevant labelling of posts 

Target Audience for Beau - Demographics and

Psychographics

I wouldn’t agree with your psychographic and it doesn’t completely match your demographic. You said mostly female and then said mainly teenage boys and girls. Also I’m not sure the song you chose is can be considered ‘indie’ and appealing to those who ‘don’t follow the crowd’. This song you have chosen reminds me of Van Morrison and I would consider it to be Pop/Soul possibly for those teens who have grown up listening to what their parents have but want something with a modern edge, fans of this music appreciate it’s old school roots but also want a contemporary sound to it.

Coldplay Analysis

Move this post to underneath the actual video, I can’t see the images, check what the issue is

Moodboard

Have you got the Prezi version of this? I can’t remember if I saw it

Go back over these posts and add context to them e.g. how has this knowledge/research impacted the why in which you have thought about your coursework? Adorno and Horkheimer,

MISSING POSTS

 Notes and review of album cover article – You should have read the article on album covers by now! Summarise what you have read and how what you have read can inform your planning

 Analysis of Digipaks – written and virtual – I think Jack may have scanned some other covers