Improvements to make from my blog feedback

Improvements

To improve my blog I need to start doing my journal posts to explain what we have been doing in lessons and independently and to explain what the purpose of everything we are doing.

Animatic - Beau

As a group, Yasmin and I need to add on a few more shots to our animatic, as it does seem quite slow paced. I think of some of the footage of him singing, we should have more close up shots of his face.

Research on Record Labels

I need to add context to my research on record labels and explain how this knowledge has impacted the way I have thought about my coursework.

You Give Me Something - James Morrison

I need to give and explanation as to why I have put this video on my blog.

In your arms - Music video analysis

I need to put this analysis with the music video, so it makes more sense.

Bruno Mars Music Video inspirations

I need to put this analysis with my music video and to explain more about how this video gave us inspirations to have animation in our video.

Pitch Feedback

I need to summarise and make comments about the feedback from our pitch. I need to explain how I am going to plan to input changes to our project. We need to make changes to the audience profile and demographics.

Blog Feedback

I have made some of the improvements Leanne has told me to do but I still need to add relevant labeling of my posts. I also need to make comments on Leanne’s feedback to show that I have critically thought about my work.

Target Audience for Beau – Demographics and Psychographics

As a group, we need to slightly change our target audience as we have said it is going to be aimed at ‘indie’ teenage boys and girls. However, we need to be more specific about the target audience and explain that it is more for ‘upper-class indie’ people, and not necessarily for people who ‘don’t follow the crowd’. Our target audience needs to be for people who have a bit of an edge to their fashion, and not for the ‘scruffy’ indie people. We will still stick to Beau wearing shirts and converse, but he will also wear a black leather jacket and possibly bracelets.

Coldplay Analysis

I need to put this post with the actual Coldplay Music Video post. I also need to fix the issue as to why the images can’t be seen.

Moodboard

I have already uploaded the Prezi version of my moodboard to my blog.

Adorno and Horkheimer

I need to add context to my post about Adorno and Horkheimer and explain how this knowledge has impacted the way in which I have thought about my coursework.

MISSING  POSTS

I need to add a post including notes and review about that album cover article that I have read. I need to summarise what I have read and explain how this can help to plan my album cover.

I need to add my analysis of digipaks to my blog, the written and virtual versions.